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I found something.A few days ago, I found a strange thing, you guess what? Tell you, that is, the oil can kill the goldfish. You might think I'm kidding, you're wrong, don't believe it, just listen to me!On Sunday morning, I got up early. I, as usual, came to the goldfish bowl and looked at my little goldfish. These five small goldfish can be beautiful, like the water, like the princess, dressed in gorgeous clothes, yellow, white, black. As I ate bread, I looked at the fish. They seem to be aware of, one by one scrambling to swim over, I look at them one by one to rush to the appearance, thought: maybe they are hungry. So, I broke a piece of bread to give them to eat, at this time, suddenly from behind my father's a broken drink, do not feed them. I was so surprised to ask, "Dad, why don't you give them to me?" he said, "it's up to you to find out.". When I listened to my father, I took out two goldfish and put them in another fish bowl, and I put the bread I had just broken down. Two fish saw, they scrambled to grab up, soon the bread was eaten up. I'm all eyes to look at them, but they may also have something. I thought to myself: my father must have lied to me. So, I went to play.The second day, I will come to see them, the two goldfish are heroic sacrifice. My heart is very sad, and suddenly, I found a layer of oil floating on the water, I thought: this layer of oil and goldfish and death has no relationship? So, I took this question to check my information. Finally, I found the answer in the "one hundred thousand why", the original is because the oil cut off the air, fish, because they do not suck the air to die.
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A few days ago, I found a strange thing, can you guess? Well, let me tell you, that is, the oil can kill the goldfish. You might think I'm kidding, but you're wrong, I am serious. On Sunday morning, I got up early. As usual, I came to the goldfish bowl and looked at my little goldfish. These five small goldfish are beautiful, like some princesses dressed in gorgeous clothes, yellow, white, black. As I ate bread, I looked at the fish. They swam one by one to rush out of the water, and I thought that maybe they were hungry. So, I broke a piece of bread to give them to eat. At this time, my father shouted behind me, "Do not feed them." I was so surprised to ask, "Dad, why don't you give them to me?" He said, "It's up to you to find out." When I listened to my father, I took out two goldfish and put them in another fish bowl. And then I put the bread I had just broken down. They scrambled to grab it, and soon the bread was eaten up. I opened all eyes to look at them, but nothing happened. I thought, my father must lie to me. So, I went to play. The next day, when I came to see them, they died. I was very sad, and suddenly, I found a layer of oil floating on the water. I thought whether this layer of oil had relationship with the death of two goldfish. So, I went to get the answer. Finally, I found it in the "Mr. Know all", which says that the oil cut off the air, so the fish die of lacking of air.
修改老师:Crystal 老师
五年级:李昕怡
我发现了
记得有一天哥哥放学回家,手里拿着两块黑黑的石头,不停地玩。它们一会儿吸在一起,一会儿分开,相互追逐,好玩极了!我看着心痒痒,就对着哥哥说道:“哥哥,能让我玩一会儿吗?”“不行,你太小,不会玩的,告诉你不许碰我的宝贝哦。”哥哥神气地回答我。不久,哥哥玩累了,就把两块小石头放在冰箱门上,两块小石头居然牢牢地吸在冰箱门上了。
第二天,哥哥上学去了,我忍不住把这两块小石头扳了下来,但它们又紧紧地吸在了一起,再费力地扳开,又吸住了,真有趣!第三次扳开,我把其中一块转了一个面,这下可好,再也吸不住了,使劲按也没用,我还以为把它弄坏了,忙放到原来的地方。
哥哥放学回家,发现宝贝不见了,大声询问我。我一看冰箱门,确实不见了,不知是怎么回事。哥哥越说越凶,还拿起一根小木棍打我,我委屈的眼泪刷的一下流下来了。见到我流泪,哥哥放下木棍,气呼呼地走了。不一会儿,爷爷回来了,见到我流泪,忙问我怎么回事,我就说了事情的经过。爷爷知道后,大声训斥哥哥:“磁石是我拿掉的,你怎么可以把它放在冰箱上呢?你不问清楚,就打你弟弟,真是太不像话了!”哥哥向我做了一个鬼脸说:“对不起,是我错怪你了。”我说:“没关系,这两块石头好像坏了,现在不能吸在一起了。”哥哥听了,哈哈大笑:“是你弄反了吧,当然是不能吸在一起了。”看着我一脸的迷茫,哥哥问爷爷拿来石头对我说:“这是磁石,是有磁性的,可以吸铁的东西,它有两极,‘N’是南极,‘S’是北极,如果南极对着北极,就会相吸;如果南极对着南极就会排斥。”说完,哥哥给我做了一个示范。
这次委屈的泪,使我发现了磁石的秘密,我真高兴!
铅山快乐作文培训学校六年级 侯煜菲
暑假里,在一次上山游玩时,我亲眼目睹了蛇蜕皮的过程。
那天下午,我在山沟里发现了一只花色斑斓的大蛇。我开始有点害怕,怕它咬我。后来我想起大人说过,除非你要碰到它,否则蛇是不会轻易攻击人的。我就不那么害怕了。便继续在一旁观察下去。
那条蛇好像在找一个东西,又仿佛很痛苦的样子,我想可能是要蜕皮了。只见那蛇看准了一个狭窄得只能容它钻过的两根树枝间的缝隙,用力地挤进去。它先把头上的皮蜕掉,然后找一些岩石或木头的地方,把身上的皮蜕掉。它又发现了一个好地方,那是树根从地面拱起了一个小洞,它卡在小洞里,身子尽力鼓起来,胀得大大的,使劲地钻。看到它痛苦的样子,真忍不住想过去帮它一把。终于,蛇把脖子上的皮全都蜕掉了。这时,它又来到一个地方,准备把身上的皮蜕掉。这蛇非常聪明,它在?嗄敬灾芪У耐恋厣嫌昧Φ啬Σ粒??Φ叵氚焉砩系钠ざ纪傻簟N掖有睦镂??佑汀
这时它发现在地上摩擦只能把肚子上的皮蜕掉,所以又换了几个位置。这时我联想到我摔了一跤,脚上磨破了一点点皮都疼得哇哇直叫,而蛇可是要把身上的皮全部蜕掉,肯定是生不如死呀。
蛇已经把身上的皮全部蜕光了,就只剩尾巴了,据说尾巴上的皮可是最难蜕的。我真有点替它担心。谁知那条蛇回头用嘴去咬尾巴上的老皮,一下子就把皮蜕了。真是一个聪明的小精灵!我不由得佩服起它来。
蛇为什么要蜕皮呢?我问了爷爷和爸爸,可他们都说不太清楚。最后我上网查了一下,终于发现了这个秘密:蛇皮是由角质层、真皮和表皮组成,但蛇的角质层是不会长大的,所以蛇才会把皮脱。蛇每隔三至四个月就要蜕一次皮。蛇蜕皮前十天就会失明,过了三至五天又会复明,这时才开始蜕皮。
作者 深圳黄埔学校六(2)班林苑
指导老师陈新发
记得有一年的一个星期日,我在家里闲着无聊,便想去同学家玩.
当我来到附近一个小巷的时,看到一位阿姨和她的孩子有说有笑,边走还边喂糖给小孩吃.在那位阿姨的旁边有一位矮个子的叔叔,大概30岁左右,差不多和阿姨并排走着.我原来以为他们是一起的,便没有怎么注意.后来,我突然看见那位“叔叔”用两跟手指头,向阿姨的袋子里伸去,从里面夹去几张钱,而那位阿姨却没有丝毫察觉,仍然和她的小孩子高高兴兴的地走着,说着,笑着.看到这种情景我呆住了.不禁想大叫:“抓小偷, 抓小偷,小偷偷钱了.”但喉咙好像不知被什么堵住了,没叫出来.也许是当时想起哥哥曾经对我说的一句话: “以后如果你看到小偷之类的人,千万不要乱叫,要不然就是你自己吃亏……”不知在什么时候,小偷注意到我了,又眼睛狠狠的盯着我,脸上的肌肉抽动了几下.好像在说:“小子,看什么看,还不快滚,找死对不对?”看他那凶样,我不由得害怕起来,一声也不敢吭.就这样,我看着那位阿姨越走越远,小偷一下子从我身边窜过,朝相反的方向逃走了……
这件事情,对我的触动很深,我意识到自己太胆小,不应该眼睁睁地放走了小偷.如果我能想徐洪刚叔叔那样,见义勇为,临危不惧,那该有多好啊!如果我们每个人遇到坏人坏事都躲得远远的,不敢挺身而出与歪风邪气作斗争,那我们的社会风气怎么能够扭转,正气怎么能够伸张呢?我虽然是一名小学生,但从小就应具有爱憎分明的观点.我决心从我做起,为扭转社会风气献出自己应有的光和热.
我发现了鱼
二(5)班 李郁也
晚上,爸爸妈妈陪我去滑旱冰。我们来到小区南大门的广场上,我看见喷水池中有水和许多小石子,我问爸爸:“爸爸,这里面有鱼吗?”
爸爸说:“没有鱼,因为这里的水是死水,没有氧气。”
我从台阶上走下来,看见水池中有一块红色的石头在动,觉得很奇怪,心里想:石头怎么会动呢?我过去仔细一看,哇!原来是一条红色的鲤鱼在水里自由自在地游来游去。