前言:想要写出一篇令人眼前一亮的文章吗?我们特意为您整理了5篇以希望为话题的作文范文,相信会为您的写作带来帮助,发现更多的写作思路和灵感。
【关键词】话题作文;拟题
How to give the topic thesis to draft examination questions fast
Ao Wei
【Abstract】The topic thesis is the optional thesis, the free thesis, because it had not stipulated that the topic and the literature style, the student may write the literary style which with the most adept mode of writing oneself most excel, like this is advantageous in the high first-level school selects the talented person, therefore appears repeatedly in each kind of test in recent years, drafts examination questions is the student deeply feels the thorny question. The author according to these years’s teaching experience, will chat several methods which and the colleague drafted examination questions fast negotiates, looks can give the teaching to bring the help from now on.【Key words】Topic thesis; Drafting examination questions
话题作文是自选作文、自由作文,由于它没有规定题目和体裁,学生可以用自己最拿手的写法写出自己最擅长的文体,这样有利于高一级学校选拔人才,所以在近几年的各种考试中频频出现,拟题是学生深感棘手的问题。笔者根据这几年的教学经验,谈谈快速拟题的几种方法与同行蹉商,望能给今后教学带来帮助。
我认为快速给话题作文拟题有以下几种方法:
1 扬长避短,定文体
紧扣话题,调动积累,选用自己最拿手的文体是快速拟题的基本前提。因为任何文章都是有体栽的,不讲文体,随心所欲的写作,只会写出结构松散,不合章法,非驴非马的“四不像”文章。况且,话题作文只要求文体不限,并非不讲文体。如以“树”为话题,可以定成记叙文《种树的故事》、《记一次有意义的植树活动》;可以写成散文――《柳树赞》《难忘的那片树林》;可以定成议论文-《生存的希望,植树造林》《谈植树的价值》等。
2 善补题,以小见大
在话题前面或后面作适当的增补,对写作范围加以限制,能使话题由大变小,由虚变实,由抽象变具体,也是常见的快速拟题的方法。如:以语文课为话题,我们可以拟为《生动的一节语文课》、《我爱语文课》《未来的语文课》《语文课畅想》等等,这些拟题从多角度缩小写作范围,选材范围更加集中,有利于我们的写作从小处着眼顺利展开。
3 巧修辞,新颖鲜活
根据指定的语言环境、文体内容,灵活巧妙地使用修辞手法,可以让文题生动形象,含蓄隽永,使文章锦上添花。如:以音乐为话题,我们可以拟为《心愿》、《母亲》、《爱的奉献》等新颖鲜活,让人过目不忘的题目。4 巧点化,妙趣横生
对影片名、歌曲名、古诗名以及成语俗语等适当点化,进行套装、借用,仿造之后作为文章的题目,常常典雅大方,妙趣横生,也是考场话题作文快带速拟题的高明之举。如:以我为话题可选用歌词《我的思恋》《最近比较烦,》,以音乐为话题可以用歌曲《感恩的心》等等,用这种方法命题,通俗明了,贴切自然,并为大家喜闻乐见。
5 注重标题的作用
标题是文章内容和读者情感心理之间的第一个接触点,标题是让阅卷老师慧眼为之一亮的第一点,标题是让人一见钟情的因子。标题也提供给读者窥视文章内容的独特视角。
6 把握拟题的原则
确切、精炼、生动、新颖、有意蕴,有文采,确切,指的是符合文章内容,同时也指遣词造句符合规范,精炼,指的是标题字数恰当,不宜过长。生动,指的是题目具有可读性,饶有情趣。新颖,指的是有新视角,新思路,新感悟,给人新鲜感。有意蕴,指的是有内在的含义。有文采,指的是标题有诗意,有文学韵味。
7 明确 的要求
标题范围尽量要小,要从自己确立的角度出发不要太大太泛; 要合理出新。如果标题太大,可以采用副标题的方式加以限制。标题不能过长,一般不要超过8个字,标题过长则显得松散。标题要含蓄,把思维蕴涵于形象的标题之中,含蓄能起到言有尽而意无穷的作用,且能加深阅卷老师对文章内容的印象和体会。
拟一个好题目,把题目演绎成一个生动的故事,用故事表达一个新颖独特的思想。拟题时要善于联想。 联想,就是由某人某事或事理推想到与其相关的其他人其他事物或其他事理的思维过程。
8 学会拟题的方法
修辞法
(1)比喻 《我渴望阳光》以阳光喻暖人的关爱,简洁含蓄,如将喻体换成“热情帮助”之类,则索然无味。又如《我心中的镜子》、《家,我们成长的摇篮》,这些设喻佳题也都富于文学色彩。
(2)借代 辽宁大连一位考生紧扣母亲乌黑发丝中的白发展开叙写,揭示岁月无情、母爱无价这一真谛,给文章拟题目《黑白债》,借色彩代本体,又亮出线索,寄托深情。又如《人生需要掌声》,这一标题借“掌声”代“鼓励”,也很有创意。
(3)比拟 《花儿又快活了》《读山千遍真有趣》前者运用拟人辞格让花儿具有人的感情,后者把“水”拟作能“读”之物,用的是拟物辞格。
(4)对偶 《书山有路,学海无涯》《做有心人,读有用书》这两例都将文旨浓缩在整齐对称的句子中,体现出考生善于推敲的语言功夫。
(5)对比 《高调做事,低调做人》高调与低调形成对比,使得标题包含哲理,令人回味。(6)双关 《我最需要一剂良药》文中“良药”既能治腿疾有能治心病,一语双关,内蕴丰富。
(7)设问 《错误?正确!》先问后答,以简驭繁,又穿插标点,构思巧妙。
(8)反问 《我们的素质教育,难道不需要发展吗?》反问中饱含着摆脱应试教育重负的强烈愿望,观点鲜明,言辞恳切。
(9)顶真 《读书快乐 快乐读书》《活读书 书读活》这两例运用顶真兼回环辞格,风趣地展示读书之趣、读书之乐和读书之法。
(10)反语 《我发现了家中的“小偷”》家中几次“失窃”,“作案者”原来是瞒着别人给灾区寄钱的一家人的三个成员,题中用“小偷”,贬词褒用,凸现一家人的高尚品德,幽默风趣。
(11)引用 《腹有诗书气自华》、《为有源头活水来》前者形象地表现读书的作用,后者揭示消除陈旧的思想方法,引用名句作题目,能较好地体现考生的文学积累和修养,给人耳目一新之感。
以“家庭”为话题――《我要的幸福》――孙燕姿
以“心愿”为话题――《一千零一个愿望》
以“素质教育”为话题-《救救孩子》(鲁迅《狂人日记》 )
以“关注生活”为话题,写生活对人的考验-《让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧》(高尔基《海燕》)以“友谊”为话题――《百年孤独》――加西亚 马尔克斯同名小说
以道歉为话题的英语范文【一】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on International Business English Writing you gave last Friday. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hua
以道歉为话题的英语范文【二】
Dear Jerry:
Hello! My best friend, we have not seen for a few weeks. A few days ago, I held a party in my house. There were a lot of friends coming to the party. We played games, sang popular songs and had a big meal. But I felt unhappy during the party, for I failed to invite my best friend, you. I write this letter to get your forgiveness for my mistake. I know you are fairly broad-minded.
To show my sincerity, I will have another party for you. It will be pleasant to invite you here. It is a good opportunity for you to meet many friends that you have not seen for a long time. The party will begin at seven o'clock on next Sunday evening in my house. Is it possible for you to come to the party? The party will not be complete without you. Wish to see you and get your forgiveness. If you have some good advises for the party, please write to me.
Best wishes to you!
Sincerely Yours,
Jess
以道歉为话题的英语范文【三】
I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.(topic)
Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
Wish you have a good time this weekend!
以抱怨为话题的英语范文【一】
I am one of the student who critical of restaurant of our seminary. We have been informed frequently that with the declining quality of the restaurant of our school it is intolerable to meal at school. It becomes the source of great complaint by student. Therefore please give me an access to put forward some disadvantage of the restaurant in order to be placed more stress on
First the expression of the students ‘face Witness that how unsavory the food is .Secondly insect is conceal in the vegetable there are times when we are prepare to have . Thirdly the price of the restaurant is too high. Finally tableware not be sanitized is used in the restaurant.
Please take it into account or it will give rise to a series of problem. In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused. I hold a belief that students will enjoy themselves when have a meal in the restaurant of our seminary.
I am looking forward to seeing the changes of the restaurant
以抱怨为话题的英语范文【二】
I venture to write to complain about the quality of the digital camera I bought last Friday at your store. During the five days the camera has been in my possession, problems have emerged one after another. For one thing, the screen is always black, making the camera no different from a traditional one. For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the camera’s operation for only two hours.
Therefore, I wish to declare a refund. I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.
以抱怨为话题的英语范文【三】
以白色污染为话题的英语范文【一】
White pollution attributable to carelessly lost throw, difficult to degradation processes, resulting in the serious pollution of the urban environment. White pollution of primarily from food package with people pace of life, social life forward facilitation, health development. In order to meet this demand, disposable foam plastic food containers, plastic bags, chopsticks, glass and other start frequently entered the people's daily life. These easy to use, affordable packaging materials to people's lives and brought its advantages. But on the other hand, these packaging materials in use after being throw, result in "white pollution"; formation of environmental hazards, as environmental issues. Pack, foam-filled packaging, snack box, mulch, etc. The use of plastic bags, bags and baskets, reduce garbage, let the Earth more beautiful!
The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.
Luckily, The government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1. The rule will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection. It is highly advocated that we should turn to cloth bags and shopping baskets from now on.
以白色污染为话题的英语范文【二】
white pollution refers to plastic pollution. it is a new member of pollution family, but it grows fast. unrecyclable plastic lunch boxes line along railroads. plastic shopping bags dance in the wind. when leaders are busy mapping out blueprints for the future, one colour white from white pollution becomes their headache.
everything in the life circle deserves its place on earth. if we continue using plastic lunch boxes, shopping bags and other unrecyclable plastic productsmwhat would happen ⅱ one day they might bury us in an ocean of white rubbishg then the earthmour common home, would be a dustbin.
to prevent this nightmare from coming true, governments need to work closely with each other and back up their verbal commitment by actions. however, it is not enough only to ask what governments can do to get rid of white pollution, we must ask ourselves what we as individuals can do to colour the earth green instead of white.
以白色污染为话题的英语范文【三】
Throw the white pollution plastic bag suround the environment was not very good.I never do that,I think environment need ours to protect.If everyone threw the plastic bag in the ground,our city will to be bad.Protect the environment it's ours duty.
以全球变暖,温室效应为话题的英语范文【一】
As is subtly revealed in the cartoons above, global warming is a real threat to our world. In the first drawing, the glaciers in the polar region are rapidly melting owing to global warming. In the second picture, a homeless polar bear is staying on an isolated big block of ice.
The purpose of these portrayals is to show us that global warming is a looming threat to people all over the world. To begin with, global warming leads to the rise of sea levels. Large sections Chinese coastal regions would gradually disappear under rising sea levels because of global warming, severely impairing the country’s social and economic progress. China’s long coastline is the base for about 70% of the large cities, over half of the domestic population and nearly 60% of the national economy. With comparatively-advanced social, economic and cultural developments, China’s off-shore regions will suffer great losses if the sea level does not cease rising. In addition, global warming increases the possibility and intensity of extreme weather such as hurricanes and snowstorms. Hurricanes and typhoons have become stronger and longer-lasting over the past 30 years. These upswings correlate with a rise in sea surface temperatures due to global warming.
Taking into account the devastating effects of global warming, we can draw the conclusion that global warming is a great threat to our world. Facing the growing menace of global warming, more scientific and active preventive measures should be taken on a larger scale to change for the better.
以全球变暖,温室效应为话题的英语范文【二】
People around the world may feel that the climate has been getting steadily warmer and warmer in recent years. Places which used to be abundant in snowfall have frequently experienced snowfree(无雪的) winters. Drought lasts longer in some dry areas. People find that without air conditioners they could hardly work or fall asleep on hotter summer days.